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    dots Submission Name: Concertdots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 139/254/170
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsConcertdots
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    sometimes you feel that piano isn’t enough
    however lightly you touch the keys --
    and I don’t need to see to know
    that they are drenched.
    people hung over the banisters, crawled
    on top of the chairs but the silence
    stretched that last note
    off the edge
    into the pit, where it still lies
    throbbing.






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