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    dots Submission Name: In Between dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 399
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsIn Between dots
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    Would you meet me in between
    Your world of dreams
    And my place of reality.

    Would you meet me
    in between
    Your world
    And my heart.

    Meet me in between
    In the times when
    Nothing is something
    And silence cracks the glass
    The pitch heard by only pups
    And the frequency equally matched.


    In between the little things
    And grander in its mass
    Out beyond the lemon tree
    And just past the masks.

    Meet me in between the hollows
    And the shore , where lizards bathe
    And jellies squish like many days before.

    Bellowing out your name
    Into the nothingness of the woods
    waiting for the leaves to tell
    The differences that is foraged.

    Careful what you eat
    Your teeth will want to sink
    Into the sweetness of an apple.
    Just like the broad before.

    (who uses that word anymore?)

    Broad....


    Beware of that wolf who's
    In love with the sheep for sheeps
    A bad ass who plays for keeps.

    Never willing to rush in a heap
    Always searching for the
    Deeper meaning.

    Sheep's counted night after night
    Who's on the minds of many.
    Counting sheep
    One sheep
    two sheep
    three sheep

    Sheeple





    In line with the rest too many to steple.



























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