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    dots Submission Name: Untoucheddots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 346
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    What is love when goes untouched
    When life's days that turn to dust.
    Is all we know just what we are
    Or do we come from afar.

    What is love when goes untouched
    And giving reasons to make us blush
    Is all we know inside a cup
    Of tears we cried for longed for love.

    Your heart was sending its frequencies
    And my mind was open and listening
    To the vibrations of your love
    And brought me close, 'like a glove.'

    What is love when goes untouched
    To boil over and erupt.

    What is love when goes untouched
    A pressure cooker that needs unlocked.

    What is love when goes untouched
    A kindled fire that begins to ignite
    Until the oxygen unites.


    Breathe Into me.

    Slowly,


    Softly

    Long Winded .........




    It was
    what it was
    and it will be
    what it will be.
    It is
    What it is.
    Leave it there
    unattended
    And see what
    happens.


    It was
    More than imagined.




















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      Often we try to make connections that aren't really there. Some things are one sided, and as much as we try to adhere ourselves, there's simply not enough glue to make it stick.
    | Posted on 2016-04-07 00:00:00 | by Janesaddiction | [ Reply to This ]
      My edit!

    What is love when it goes untouched
    when life's days that turn it to dust
    it is all we know just what we are
    or do we, have we come too far?

    What is love if it goes untouched
    giving a reason to make one blush
    it’s all we know when inside the cup
    of tears we cried for a forgotten love.

    Our hearts did send their frequencies
    and my mind was open and listening
    to the vibration of your love echoes
    that brought me close, 'to a glove.'

    What is love if it goes untouched
    when love boils over if you erupt
    what is love if it goes untouched
    pressure cookers that unlocked.

    Is love, love if it goes untouched
    a kindled fire that begins to ignite
    until the oxygen unites the planets
    explains love, you unite as one body.


    Breathe into me slowly, softly the wind
    it was what it was, it will be what it will be
    love is what it is, love it remains unattended
    you see what happens if your love is imagined.
    | Posted on 2016-04-04 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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