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    dots Submission Name: The Magic of Wordsdots
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    Author: krs3332003
    Elite Ratio:    6.47 - 144/114/64
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Somebody said - make it happen...and so the cucumbers began to float.


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    dotsThe Magic of Wordsdots
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    Once upon a merrily-after
    a random doper thrived
    Wizard of the woods folks said
    enchanted poems he d'rived

    He loved his herbs and shrooms
    of which he did consume
    A little or a lot
    they mused his words in thought

    His craft was strong
    with smoke and swirl
    Of scented candles
    through ink and curl

    It matters not just how
    that he could make things float
    Say a pickle jar from there
    his quill indeed did note

    Half-a-foot above and below
    he made it rise and fall
    Salty green light in the air
    it danced like a feather for all

    "Twist and twirl.
    Flutter and fly.
    Oh heavenly pickles,
    I love to get high!"

    He danced and sang
    and tumbled around
    The table-top shook
    as the cukes came down

    "No matter the time,
    for nothing more.
    Forgive and forget."
    he did implore

    "Yes I am odd,
    but I know how-to.
    The magic of words,
    of spells cast onto...

    ...briny fruits and such."

    2016 by Kelly R. Sullivan




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    | Posted on 2017-01-29 00:00:00 | by randomthought | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This is such a fun write. Lighthearted, carefree, and the rhyming works well here. I enjoyed this.
    | Posted on 2016-07-08 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]
      Terribly cute. I was just thinking of having a big dill even though it's still quite morning. Actually, I just mentioned feeling like a mushroom (not eating one, being one) in my last comment given.

    (Just a bit spooky, if it didn't happen a lot.)

    A man should explore his options, I think. Yesterday was an IPA for breakfast since I was out of coffee. Bitterness comes in more than one flavor.

    Thanks for the rhyme, I appreciate the anticipation it gives to each line. Too rare now days I think.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2016-04-23 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      We are all Ripe in one way, shape, or form. Don't worry persistence pays off. You'll get where you are going.
    | Posted on 2016-04-10 00:00:00 | by 1tkfyl | [ Reply to This ]


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