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    dots Submission Name: Jaded Sectionsdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    24/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 622/961/452
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Principal is to the matter,
    My dead silence woes...
    Anxious anticipation forever,
    Downward disappointment we go...

    If a light breaks the surface,
    Suffice the disease breaths at heart...
    Bleeding a reality I must face...
    Shredding three times a soul apart...

    Frustration to even explain...
    What I can't even understand...
    Rabidly desolating my name....
    When all adoration fails...
    I begin to lose who I really am...




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      Interesting... myself, I have forgot to struggle, forgot to strive, forgot to worry about much of anything at all. Hence I have additionally lost any creativity of late, kind of like a mushroom which no longer grows, it's purpose apparently fulfilled and nothing left to do but whither away slowly. At this point I don't really know if I ever was "myself", but just a series of weather changes as the seasons passed.

    My own guitar stands and stares at me, wondering why I never learned to play it so much as play with it. Hey, maybe that storm is yet to come?

    | Posted on 2016-04-23 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Very introspective perspective on human nature and the ills that befallen us if we are not completely honest with ourselves. A thought provoking poem.
    | Posted on 2016-04-13 00:00:00 | by MaryMaryBeth | [ Reply to This ]


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