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    dots Submission Name: Some Confusiondots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Prose/
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    Description:
       In death
    We see


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    dotsSome Confusiondots
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    Learn not to compare one thing to another - qualities may not be measured.
    My pain has no more volume than yours while our wars fight wars, but our people fight people.

    Nothing allows you to live besides yourself; just as death, just as social virtues and just as your flaws...

    Moving forward, life comes as it does.
    You may stick in one place, but your body may never change positions.

    Whereas you could die,
    and may you only be born again to learn what you otherwise did not learn before.




    Submitted on 2016-04-05 13:07:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good writing! I find it very thought provoking. Specially the second line about war fighting war and people fighting people; it is intense and very powerful + musical description.

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    | Posted on 2016-04-14 00:00:00 | by Iram | [ Reply to This ]


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