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Aftermath of an Ilusion

Author: MaryMaryBeth
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Aftermath of an Ilusion

The Aftermath of an Illusion

A conversation
which is
engulfed in a convenient swirl
between truths and falsehoods
insidious and coy
between soul and self

intended to be
private and public
between good and evil

and is often either
loud and silent
between an elephant and a mule

But for me the aftermath of an illusion is as real as an explosion from overseas.

Submitted on 2016-04-10 09:07:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Sometimes we hear what we want to hear, regardless of what's being spoken. Very thought provoking.
| Posted on 2016-04-13 00:00:00 | by Janesaddiction | [ Reply to This ]
  Makes me raise some retrospection into the past of our solar system. Makes me wonder if our galaxy's only the reflection of its predecessor.

Gnarly read y'got there
| Posted on 2016-04-10 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]

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