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    dots Submission Name: Aftermath of an Ilusiondots
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    Author: MaryMaryBeth
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 8/8/7
    Words: 340
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    dotsAftermath of an Ilusiondots
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    The Aftermath of an Illusion

    A conversation
    which is
    engulfed in a convenient swirl
    between truths and falsehoods
    appearing
    insidious and coy
    between soul and self

    intended to be
    private and public
    between good and evil

    and is often either
    loud and silent
    between an elephant and a mule

    But for me the aftermath of an illusion is as real as an explosion from overseas.




    Submitted on 2016-04-10 09:07:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Sometimes we hear what we want to hear, regardless of what's being spoken. Very thought provoking.
    | Posted on 2016-04-13 00:00:00 | by Janesaddiction | [ Reply to This ]
      Makes me raise some retrospection into the past of our solar system. Makes me wonder if our galaxy's only the reflection of its predecessor.

    Gnarly read y'got there
    | Posted on 2016-04-10 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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