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    dots Submission Name: Daddy Please dots
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    Author: LonelyNight
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    Description:
       A younge girl is in pain to see her father walk away


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    dotsDaddy Please dots
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    Daddy daddy please don't yell
    daddy daddy please don't shove
    daddy daddy please put the bottle down
    god oh god help my daddy
    daddy daddy please don't say those words
    daddy daddy please not with the belt
    daddy daddy please don't use the needle anymore
    god oh god help my daddy
    daddy daddy please put the bag down
    daddy daddy please don't grab the door
    daddy daddy please don't walk out
    god oh god tell my daddy to stay.




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