Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: did i ever matter? dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: LonelyNight
    Elite Ratio:    0.19 - 0/2/2
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/You left me
    Total Views: 478
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 676



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsdid i ever matter? dots
    -------------------------------------------



    Did I ever matter?

    Did you ever really care?

    You promised you would always be here

    How come i don't see you anymore?

    You said i was your all

    How come now i feel like i'm nothing at all?

    I was always embraced in warmth

    How come now i'm frozen?

    I was at the top of your list

    How come my name is not there anymore?

    It seemed like it would be forever

    How come now it feels like we never exited?

    Did I ever matter?

    Did you ever really care?





    Submitted on 2016-04-10 23:11:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I've been in the place you were when you were writing this. And it is hard to put the feelings into words. Sometimes you try, but no phrase seems to encompass how your heart is aching...your confusion...your loneliness. This is a good start, but I know you're hurting more than this can express. In terms of a poem about a broken heart, this is kind of a lukewarm effort. Keep writing. The words will come easier, they will flow together to form the right feelings, and you will be more able to express everything.

    It's a good effort. My favorite line:

    "I was always embraced in warmth"
    | Posted on 2016-05-07 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    written by Daniel Barlow
    Etiquette written by saartha
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    AI written by poetotoe
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    True Death written by layDsayD
    I Do, I Do written by poetotoe
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    Shi written by ShyOne
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Physician, Heal Thyself written by WriteSomething
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Cover written by saartha
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Fasade written by jackz

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    New users can only get up to two comments without commenting.