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    dots Submission Name: A little mix of this and that dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/175
    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA little mix of this and that dots
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    Be it that you may
    Someday we shall
    Say that love was lived
    While others sin and
    boast about
    The number they
    Have conquered.

    (Is that a word?)


    La conquistador
    La toro
    Rojo
    La cortina
    Inflamada
    No...
    La rojo
    Inflamada
    carne cortinas.


    La mano peluda.

    Molti bene.


    Grammar I know......






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