In him

Author: Janesaddiction ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8 /25 /20 Words: 59

Class/Type: Poetry /Longing Total Views: 1792 Average Vote:    No vote yet. Bytes: 358

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In him

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Gray, green gaze reflecting my own our spot, it absorbs us the feeling is nothing I've known A misplaced lock above my brow gently put back in its place not wanting to leave the here and now Engulfed by embrace as I am set free needing to linger one more moment for in him, I am me

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