In him by Janesaddiction

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Author:	Janesaddiction
ASL Info:	48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:	1.94 - 8/25/19
Words:	59

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	1433
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	358

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In him

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Gray, green gaze reflecting my own
our spot, it absorbs us
the feeling is nothing I've known

A misplaced lock above my brow
gently put back in its place
not wanting to leave the here and now

Engulfed by embrace as I am set free
needing to linger one more moment
for in him, I am me

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