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In him

Author: Janesaddiction
ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 8 /25 /20
Words: 59
Class/Type: Poetry /Longing
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In him

Gray, green gaze reflecting my own
our spot, it absorbs us
the feeling is nothing I've known

A misplaced lock above my brow
gently put back in its place
not wanting to leave the here and now

Engulfed by embrace as I am set free
needing to linger one more moment
for in him, I am me

Submitted on 2016-04-13 13:20:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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