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    dots Submission Name: In himdots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    2.01 - 8/24/16
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsIn himdots
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    Gray, green gaze reflecting my own
    our spot, it absorbs us
    the feeling is nothing I've known

    A misplaced lock above my brow
    gently put back in its place
    not wanting to leave the here and now

    Engulfed by embrace as I am set free
    needing to linger one more moment
    for in him, I am me




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