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    dots Submission Name: Simple Silencedots
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    Author: Iram
    ASL Info:    25/F/from your world
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 50/62/55
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 453
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    dotsSimple Silencedots
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    I was living with the flickering candles

    There was darkness beyond them

    There was all but not them

    But in the dark there were eyes

    And words

    There were teeth grown on tongues

    Whimpers were kept in lungs

    There were hefty lofty dunes

    Of chandeliers, dust and bones

    There were glamours of gothic mourns

    There was arts for resurrection

    Halloween was for horrors

    Decors placed on ashes

    Tattoos over their rashes

    There were scratches framed as lashes

    There were sprinkled perfumes of

    literature around coffins

    Why them speeches... for the burnt

    Who were shed off the stamen bed

    For the tombs, at halt and hush,

    Of simple death.




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