Simple Silence by Iram

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Submission Name: Simple Silence dots

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Author:	Iram
ASL Info:	25/F/from your world
Elite Ratio:	2.66 - 50/62/55
Words:	130

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Simple Silence dots

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I was living with the flickering candles

There was darkness beyond them

There was all but not them

But in the dark there were eyes

And words

There were teeth grown on tongues

Whimpers were kept in lungs

There were hefty lofty dunes

Of chandeliers, dust and bones

There were glamours of gothic mourns

There was arts for resurrection

Halloween was for horrors

Decors placed on ashes

Tattoos over their rashes

There were scratches framed as lashes

There were sprinkled perfumes of

literature around coffins

Why them speeches... for the burnt

Who were shed off the stamen bed

For the tombs, at halt and hush,

Of simple death.

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