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    dots Submission Name: You be the Writer dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsYou be the Writer dots
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    You be the writer and I'll show you how to play
    As you pull the strings
    My puppets claim to say

    " this is fun now let me go my own way,
    Cause these strings you've held onto
    They keep me in my place.
    I would like to go and run
    But I'm stuck here being pulled upon."

    You be the writer and tell me what to say
    Fill my mouth with letters that spell out the way.
    Tell me all your demons so life gives away
    All the negativities that might fly your way.

    Why don't you be the writer
    Fill my heart with love
    The depth of your letters
    They feel like a hug
    And only you will know
    The right things to say
    Cause you are the writer
    And know exactly
    What to say.

    Why don't you
    be the writer
    And I will act
    In Your play.


    'Why don't you be the writer
    And make me out of clay'
    Carve out my features and
    Help to say all the things
    You need to hear, all the voids
    And emptiness from all the years
    Help to take away the fears
    From all the years of tears.


    Why don't you be the writer
    And invite me out to play.
    Journey to other lands
    And create a new way
    To be the light you're after
    Fill you will saige.

    Why don't you be the writer
    You are better at it anyway.
    The perfect combination of
    Masculine and feminine.





























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