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    dots Submission Name: JMSN - Love Myselfdots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsJMSN - Love Myselfdots
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    Nothing left for you, baby.
    Not a yes, or a maybe.
    Ain't no reason to hang around here.
    Find somebody else.

    Cant you see that I'm crazy,
    And I don't want you to hate me.
    But, you know I can't stick around here.
    See, I don't love myself.

    So, how can I expect somebody else
    to do
    the things that I... That I can't do myself?
    So, I won't hurt nobody else anymore.

    I won't hurt nobody else.
    Nobody.




    Submitted on 2016-04-18 21:51:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Everybody loves oneself the most. This is not true what you have written in the poem.
    | Posted on 2016-05-04 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      YOU MUST. To then find the true love of your life because then she can respect you as you do yourself. Pillars of love. 3 specifically. Love, Trust . respect. You must have all three to be capable of reciprocating.
    | Posted on 2016-04-21 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]


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