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    dots Submission Name: Oh Verona dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 154
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    dotsOh Verona dots
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    Beyond the olive trees and up
    Above the hills
    of vineyards vines
    Living years ago and guiding
    All the Vespa's near
    the winding roads
    That fill your eyes
    will natures guise
    of normalcy.


    Down the roads where ancients lived.
    Their stories live through the ages.
    The Romeos and Juliet's that defied
    Their names and redefined our hearts.


    That poetry that lives again
    And again In the hearts and minds
    For centuries those words that begin to
    Ignite the love from within, that helps us to
    Thrive and feel alive
    each and every time we
    Decide to read at night.


    Shakespeare is the one and only
    who can make you read
    And read
    and read
    and.....
    Ooohhh man.


    Sometimes I need
    to read it
    way more than I should
    just to understand it.




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