Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Oh Verona dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 528
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1009



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsOh Verona dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Beyond the olive trees and up
    Above the hills
    of vineyards vines
    Living years ago and guiding
    All the Vespa's near
    the winding roads
    That fill your eyes
    will natures guise
    of normalcy.


    Down the roads where ancients lived.
    Their stories live through the ages.
    The Romeos and Juliet's that defied
    Their names and redefined our hearts.


    That poetry that lives again
    And again In the hearts and minds
    For centuries those words that begin to
    Ignite the love from within, that helps us to
    Thrive and feel alive
    each and every time we
    Decide to read at night.


    Shakespeare is the one and only
    who can make you read
    And read
    and read
    and.....
    Ooohhh man.


    Sometimes I need
    to read it
    way more than I should
    just to understand it.




    Submitted on 2016-04-19 23:36:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201213

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    To Glow written by krs3332003
    Transparent written by Daniel Barlow
    To written by SavedDragon
    Linger written by saartha
    Giving written by jjd
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Incubus written by monad
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry