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Submission Name: Happy dots

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Author:	Chelebel
Elite Ratio:	2.19 - 53/167/177
Words:	304

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Happy

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When love is Absent

we loose our minds.

And decide that,

we are happiest

when distracted.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.