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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/175
    Words: 304
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    When love is Absent































    we loose our minds.





    And decide that,


    we are happiest









































































































    when distracted.







    Submitted on 2016-04-21 22:05:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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