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    dots Submission Name: Guinnessdots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1547/457/118
    Words: 16
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       A love poem... of certain course.


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    dotsGuinnessdots
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    Cold blast in the darkness
    awaken all
    the throat to quiver
    be mine
    belong




    Submitted on 2016-04-23 08:58:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha, yes! I must admit to a new addiction to craft beer. There's a whole culture to it. But still, Guinness is good, Guinness is great, yay beer!

    It was fun.

    Erin
    | Posted on 2016-04-27 00:00:00 | by BlankSheet | [ Reply to This ]


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