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Author: C. Starr
ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130 /196 /68
Words: 105
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Written 3/21/2015


Heartless prick of the needle.
Which holds my weakness...
In the barrel.
You pushed it down like a plunger.
A sociopathic scar.
A piece of art I want to deface.
Something I wished was real but now resign to erase.

An addiction to you. bubbles in the spoon.
The tone of your skin.
The smell of your day filling up the room.
I get used to it.
The madness.
The score.
Horrible decisions...
To numb myself & use a little more.

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