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Author: C. Starr
ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130 /196 /68
Words: 101
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Take me on your journey of pain.
I’ll go along.
Skipping, happily.
Unaware of the clouds forming.
Yes, darling…
Give me sparkling dark blue tears from my eyes & from the sky.
Glittery & blackened,
Darkened by the deceit.
It’s a superhero color but you’re the villain in my dreams.
Forever captive in precious unknown metals,
That piece of my heart that wants you.
A particle of a gem formed by the pressure of promises.
The fraction of my soul which is eternally seeking your truth.

Submitted on 2016-04-23 15:49:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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