Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Single Cell Organismdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: C. Starr
    ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
    Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130/196/68
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 750
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1504



    Description:
       Written 2014.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSingle Cell Organismdots
    -------------------------------------------


    My brain is the ultimate organ.
    The music it makes has a one track mind of its own.
    What did I just say a second ago ?
    My head is a playground for all that is wrong.
    One big cell controlling it all.

    It melds, it melts into oblivion.
    And into something you could never control.
    The drugs, the disasters, the disconnection with it all.
    The moment it molded into a shape unknown.
    We don’t know. We never saw it happen.
    All I am is re-born.
    Into this reproduction of my cellular construction.
    Without repercussion of emotional or physical condition.
    Into this world re-imagined.
    Re-envisioned.
    Re designed & discovered.
    Re-invented & delivered.
    Into one cell of immaculate conception.

    The lover, the muse, the crazy midnight poet,
    The math, the mythology, the magical rhythm of it.
    The mind, the kindness, the intention, the whole of me melded into one.
    Big cell of consciousness.
    The complete correlation of what two cornea have seen.
    In one cell within one being.
    The culmination of a human.
    Coherent in this recreation.
    Subject to my own suggestions.
    Self contained structure of knowledge.
    One cell of circumstance & consistency.
    One mind free of bondage.
    The restraints of being conscious can no longer hold me hostage.




    Submitted on 2016-04-23 15:57:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201225

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Redemption written by poetotoe
    Etiquette written by saartha
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Dream written by closetpoet
    The World written by jjd
    Records I written by Raphael
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    mimicry written by expiring_touch
    prison written by ShyOne
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Tartarus written by endlessgame23
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Comme un lion en avril written by Outlaw
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    The Old Mill written by Wolfwatching
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry