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    dots Submission Name: Heartbroken Heartbreakerdots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 407
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsHeartbroken Heartbreakerdots
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    At first you were a stranger.
    With all this emotion comes danger.
    I've always been a heartbreaker.
    But now I'm feeling these things.
    Cause girl I'm feeling vibes that you know you shouldn't bring,
    A pretty young thing with a dangerous swing.
    And I just want to tell you.

    Here's my number baby.
    Don't think I am crazy.
    But you're the type of lady,
    Who has me thinking maybe I...

    Maybe I can make her call.
    We can take the fall.
    Smoke and drink then fuck and maybe go through some withdrawal.
    I can show you things them other boys don't know about at all.
    But I'll never have it all.
    My memories of her will always haunt me when recalled.
    But I guess that's how it goes when my feelings are involved.

    So now tell me your feelings.
    I can help you with healing.
    This might not sound appealing.
    But maybe we can figure out.
    All the bullshit you and I are really all about.
    Go tell your friends about it even if you gotta shout.
    Then you can go and tell em i said.

    Here's my number baby.
    Don't think I am crazy.
    But you're the type of lady,
    Who has me thinking maybe I...

    Maybe I can make her call.
    We can take the fall.
    Smoke and drink then fuck and maybe go through some withdrawal.
    I can show you things them other boys don't know about at all.
    But I'll never have it all.
    My memories of her will always haunt me when recalled.
    But I guess that's how it goes when my feelings are involved.

    We need to get to lovin.
    Cause through all the bullshit baby,
    I still feel a little somethin.
    And if you don't know what to do.
    Close your eyes and touch me,
    We can get lost in our moves.
    Our sex is more than motion because we have nothing to prove.
    But then I start to remember...

    My memories of her will always haunt me when recalled.
    But I guess that's how it goes when my feelings are involved.
    Maybe we can take the fall.
    Smoke and drink then fuck and maybe go through some withdrawal.
    I can show you things them other boys don't know about at all.
    But I'll never have it all.
    No I can never have it all from you.









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    ||| Comments |||
      So, I'm thinking this is meant to be a spoken word poem. There are some poems that work well both spoken and written; this one is one that would have been better spoken. There is a lot of hip and a little bit of hop to it and even though there is profanity it does not take away from the meaning of it at all, but perhaps if you want the reader to make their own assumption of the poem maybe have two writes of it...this the spoken and the other meant to be interpreted by the reader.
    | Posted on 2016-05-30 00:00:00 | by Brwnsknsam05 | [ Reply to This ]


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