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    dots Submission Name: unentitled inspector ERSKIN dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 190
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    As we all discover, uncover, or recover all the lost facts of humanity

    As we breakdown the codes of ideology, history, mankind and its morality

    Chromosomes , fractals, other genomes


    The ocean, mammals, tiny organisms.














    As we all do our inspections



















    (Such inspector- erskins)






















    we all do








    Remember you and me, are 'but a dream within a dream'
    Single cell organism multiplied indefinitely,









    so long as you;


    Follow the rules
    Believe in it
    Love it
    Want it
    Follow it
    Invest into it
    Control it
    Are born into it


    Sinking
    as
    you
    are it




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      National Geographic you're not.
    | Posted on 2016-05-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      I was following this with some real content till...Well, you sorta lost me at "so long as you;"
    Could you explain? PM, post, anything - My aptitude sometimes only stations itself where there's familiarity, and there's nothing familiar to me about "Follow[ing] the rules".

    On another note, I've been mulling over the concept for ages that with modern discoveries comes the tying-together of all that's relevant. Something in one field having nothing to do with another could actually be connected.

    I do that a lot; Identifying distant relatives in theories and facts, so for that, I do feel close.
    I feel close to this write. Thank you.
    | Posted on 2016-04-26 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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