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    dots Submission Name: Dreamsdots

    Author: MaryMaryBeth
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 8/8/7
    Words: 21
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Dreams remembered
    night or day;
    they seem real
    Tormented I feel, by most days
    heavenly lights shine, what do they see?

    Submitted on 2016-04-26 22:49:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      When I was small, I told my father that if you would put yourself in perspective of the Sun, you'd see everything that's lit up, but nothing that's in the shade.
    He couldn't comprehend that, but this piece made me think of myself from then; wanting to see what the Sun would see. Later on, I'd learn to appreciate what I can see that the Sun cannot - Now, I appreciate seeing.

    Just see.
    Just love what you see.
    | Posted on 2016-05-16 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      you dummy.
    | Posted on 2016-05-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

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