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    dots Submission Name: The Love I Never Knewdots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    1.94 - 8/25/19
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Love I Never Knewdots
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    I entered this life alone,
    conceived by the deeds of two
    'til fault and shame prevailed
    The love I never knew

    Every path presented a choice
    guiding me towards an avenue,
    forever wandering, seeking my destiny
    The love I never knew

    Emptiness and longing,
    over the years how it grew
    Until the day I read your words
    The love I never knew

    If one has patience long enough
    a cloud covered sunset reveals its vibrant hue
    Colors that promise new beginnings
    The love I never knew

    The answer has been there all along
    It could be only you,
    for when you look at me I finally know
    The love I never knew




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    | Posted on 2016-05-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, nice poem. I liked how it flowed and made me feel.
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