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Author:	Janesaddiction
ASL Info:	48/F/Somewhere on A1A
Elite Ratio:	2.01 - 8/24/16
Words:	117

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	922
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The Love I Never Knew dots

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I entered this life alone,
conceived by the deeds of two
'til fault and shame prevailed
The love I never knew

Every path presented a choice
guiding me towards an avenue,
forever wandering, seeking my destiny
The love I never knew

Emptiness and longing,
over the years how it grew
Until the day I read your words
The love I never knew

If one has patience long enough
a cloud covered sunset reveals its vibrant hue
Colors that promise new beginnings
The love I never knew

The answer has been there all along
It could be only you,
for when you look at me I finally know
The love I never knew

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cute
| Posted on 2016-05-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
Wow, nice poem. I liked how it flowed and made me feel.
| Posted on 2016-04-30 00:00:00 | by MaryMaryBeth | [ Reply to This ]

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