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    dots Submission Name: He said She said dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
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    dotsHe said She said dots
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    "You are perfect look at you," He said.
    'No, not really, nope." She said.
    "Yes you are, well wait." He said.
    "Yes I know. I was once a wrestler in high school.
    Stop looking at my ears." She said.

    Cauliflowears
    and everything nice.


    "Well, I think you are perfect.
    Is there anything about me that you don't like?" He said.

    "Yes, your ankles." She said.
    "You might want to consider plastic surgery."


























    Submitted on 2016-04-27 22:47:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm confused, what does it mean?
    | Posted on 2016-05-11 00:00:00 | by ilovepuppies | [ Reply to This ]
      Miracle Grow works too.
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