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    dots Submission Name: Haiku: The Night Seadots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.03 - 75/186/232
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsHaiku: The Night Seadots
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    Waves laugh at the pink
    sunrise, reminding dark nights they're
    forever---lost at sea.




    Submitted on 2016-04-28 20:02:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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