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    dots Submission Name: Horizonsdots
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    Author: 1tkfyl
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 1/5/2
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 448
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    Description:
       Mistakes we've made


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    Why do I wait, is there something new?
    Is the something special, is a payment due?
    A mistake long past, an err gone wry?
    Was my father angry, did my mother cry?
    If ever regained, my long lost soul,
    remember a friend whom you used to know.





    Submitted on 2016-04-29 20:22:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem reminds me of something I would have written when I was a teenager, its sad. :( I'm sorry you've had things so hard. The poem does sound good though, it has a very nice flow.
    | Posted on 2016-05-11 00:00:00 | by ilovepuppies | [ Reply to This ]
      The father sees a crowd of bludgeoned bodies, but fails to notice his daughter's face.
    To which do we owe our condolences?
    | Posted on 2016-05-11 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Good idea.
    | Posted on 2016-05-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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