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    dots Submission Name: What If dots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsWhat If dots
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    what if:
    You are
    someone's anonymous
    HERO
    because you
    ARE YOU
    and completely
    humble.






    What if:
    You are the best
    you could ever be
    just because you
    believed.


    What if:
    You are
    loved
    silently.


    What if:
    Life ignited into prosperity of the heart.







    What if:
    You were the sole inspiration that ignited a revolution.












    What if:
    Life lead you right to me.





    What then?







    Would you know how to act with impulsion?














































    Submitted on 2016-05-05 20:30:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WTF not what if.
    | Posted on 2016-05-06 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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