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    dots Submission Name: Rifletto IL Tuo Amore Verso Di Medots
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    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsRifletto IL Tuo Amore Verso Di Medots
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    IL mio cuero so,
    e' pieno di pietra,
    ma L'amore
    cresce dall'ignoto.

    Mi Rejuiventate.
    Soley attraverso accorate parole.
    Lo ti amo in molti modi languages.
    E Demensions, che riflette
    il tuo amore verso di me.







    Submitted on 2016-05-05 21:45:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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