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    dots Submission Name: Gigolo lostdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGigolo lostdots
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    Inviting pain
    intrepid lovers
    longing to name
    another notch

    still it remains
    the catalyst
    that drove logic
    from sweet intentions

    yearning for remembrance;
    identity given away
    a payment for what might remain
    when barren souls need a blanket

    only to have regret
    cling to what remains
    in self serving desperation
    promising love

    to all that will listen




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