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    dots Submission Name: A voiddots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA voiddots
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    It was yesterday,
    but it seems -
    it seems to me
    like tomorrow

    running into it,
    or away from it
    it seems to catch me
    Houdini's embrace

    Comfort from pain
    washed in acidic rain
    invited in moments
    of awkward need

    open eyes see
    what needs to be
    clenched heart
    denies another beat

    cries of darkness
    into tear soaked pillows of emptiness
    expect greatness
    from an unknown space




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