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    dots Submission Name: Musedots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    dotsMusedots
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    Inspiration.
    You planted that seed with your love.
    What's grown into us,
    shades me,
    protects me,
    offers it's branches to swing from,
    in joyful exuberance,
    and offers it's fruitful self to sustain me.
    From it, new life will blossom
    Cycles will be repeated
    but it will stand fast
    against any storm
    growing stronger
    rooted deep
    in our fertile love
    no longer am I fallow




    Submitted on 2016-05-07 06:47:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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