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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    whether it's the seconds I count
    between thoughts of her
    or the time it took
    for her to find me
    to carve her way through life
    changing the landscapes she touched
    until she finally flowed
    into me
    into one
    she is measured
    not only by time or distance
    she is more
    she is the answer
    an equation of life's variables,
    the summation of years weighed,
    against dreams
    and aspirations
    of what might be built
    on tomorrows
    now known as my today
    she is everything
    by any measure
    and the answer is mine




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    ||| Comments |||
      There was a line in there that reminded me of a piece I wrote some years ago:
    "Whether it's..." "or the time it took..."
    Could just sound alike, could be exactly the same - I can't exactly say, but reading this brought back some vague memories of the past - How I used to feel, especially.

    I once loved a woman like this.
    I feel every word.
    | Posted on 2016-05-15 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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