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    dots Submission Name: Solid footing dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSolid footing dots
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    Looking through The Forest

    I want to see the trees.



    Trunks and stumps

    So I may know what not to trip over.

    So I may have solid footing on the ground.

    So I may run and not walk

    Dance and not fall.

    Feel joy in the rain

    as it falls on my face

    And washes away

    all the pain.



    Cleansing , anew

    Awash In the thoughts of you.

    Engulfed by Hopes Dreams

    The Day seems brighter

    At just the thought

    Of just a glimpse

    A mere second

    in all of these hours

    It makes me smile.




    Submitted on 2016-05-10 00:29:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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