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    dots Submission Name: Bitter Seadots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBitter Seadots
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    I am sinking
    alone
    I'm sinking in this bitter sea
    I am a stone
    thrown from someone's hopeless dream

    I have become
    what no one needs
    I'm cast away into this bitter sea
    I am a stone
    picked without regard, for callous necessity

    I've been honed
    from perpetual turbulence
    I am plagued by my bitter need
    I am a stone
    perfected from the form that was born

    I am a stone
    strong
    thrown into darkness, this bitter sea
    I am again alone
    welcome, my new home




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