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    dots Submission Name: biff tannendots
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    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Spoof/Happy
    Total Views: 856
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    Description:
       i just took a shower and i had a thought
    who is ready for some MEDIOCRE ATTEMPTS AT USING WORDS :)


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    dotsbiff tannendots
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    make like a tree, and

    1. plant your feet firmly on the ground. you are a monolith of strength, and beauty;

    2. grow upwards, find nourishment in others, but also learn how to use that nourishment to better yourself;

    3. learn to shed old habits, and things that no longer work; they will bring forth a positive loop, and feed your ventures into new exciting times;

    4. or you can be really forthcoming: scatter around you your opinions, your thoughts, your problems, and let someone else help clean you up;

    5. strange vines, weird bugs, and other such things will try to invade you - learn to protect yourself appropriately

    6. when things get too much, when you crane your trunk in search of something different, you can always leave




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