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    dots Submission Name: Risingdots

    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    It was buried within me since birth.
    A sprouted seedling reaching for light from the dirt.
    I'm just one out of billions on Earth.
    But I'll fight everyday to show them what I am worth.

    I pushed through all of their hate.
    Found power and decided to control my own fate.
    They can never appreciate.
    And that's why ill laugh when looking back to this date.

    No more shall i rest.
    These tears have gone dry.
    Considered the best.
    Cause im empty inside.

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