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Lady


Author: ilovepuppies
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Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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This is about my puppy lady, im trying to describe her in a cute and fun way.


Lady


Hi! My name is Lady, and I'm a pretty little girl
every time mommy talks to me, I give her a little twirl.
I like to talk with my two front paws, and if you see me pause
beware, I become a snappy miniature version of jaws.
Don't worry though, I just bite to play
I've never hurt mommy, even on a feisty day.
Sometimes I can be a little scardy-cat, but thats okay
mommy said she will always love me anyway.




Submitted on 2016-05-11 22:59:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Cute little piece. Nice job with the voice and personification of the puppy. Of course, when we think of them as part of the family, then it makes the task a bit easier. Welcome to the site!
| Posted on 2016-05-12 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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