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    dots Submission Name: Ladydots
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    Author: ilovepuppies
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 4/2/2
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       This is about my puppy lady, im trying to describe her in a cute and fun way.


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    dotsLadydots
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    Hi! My name is Lady, and I'm a pretty little girl
    every time mommy talks to me, I give her a little twirl.
    I like to talk with my two front paws, and if you see me pause
    beware, I become a snappy miniature version of jaws.
    Don't worry though, I just bite to play
    I've never hurt mommy, even on a feisty day.
    Sometimes I can be a little scardy-cat, but thats okay
    mommy said she will always love me anyway.




    Submitted on 2016-05-11 22:59:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cute little piece. Nice job with the voice and personification of the puppy. Of course, when we think of them as part of the family, then it makes the task a bit easier. Welcome to the site!
    | Posted on 2016-05-12 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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