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Weekly


Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 139 /256 /171
Words: 41
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Weekly



No extra blanks between
to document the last few takes
-my blinking glassy eyes- hay fever
or cold, or one more
razed emotion-
shall pass along the bend of space
I'd spin around
gasp
at this finality






Submitted on 2016-05-13 05:00:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like that this poem (line by line) cannot be anticipated. In that way it twists: and it twists, keeping a live-action.

Right there....
bottle that shit up.
| Posted on 2016-05-23 00:00:00 | by Daniel Barlow | [ Reply to This ]


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