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    dots Submission Name: Dressed in Wooldots
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    Author: Rhythmal
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    dotsDressed in Wooldots
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    You're more savage than you'd think.
    Just like every other wolf who learned the advantage
    of a wool cloak when he was young enough for it to matter.
    You grew into it, all your sharp pieces went dull,
    and you almost enjoy the shepherds hand.
    But you can still feel it, just deep enough to ignore,
    but it is there.
    The Lust,
    the hunger,
    the dissatisfaction.
    Your soul burns at the edge of complacency.




    Submitted on 2016-05-14 12:15:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Definitely gonna dedicate this piece to a certain someone - Not without credit, of course.

    I almost felt like the one speaking, as though these words would've perfectly fit through my mouth. That kind of rare experience could be a product of your fine way of wording, or it could be that we share some kind of technique or style.
    If you ever have the time, feel free to check out my works and see if you can say the same.
    | Posted on 2016-05-15 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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