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    dots Submission Name: Old Julydots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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       7-24-15


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    dotsOld Julydots
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    I'm sorry, I'm careless and I'm thoughtless
    But all I am is apathy and this fury is a rare thing, rising.
    It's a cold fire burning and it hurts.
    And every day i feel like I'm dying
    But I'm sorry
    I'm careless and I'm thoughtless
    And my fear is no excuse
    For disregarding your pain and your coming heartache
    I can still feel it, the ache within me too
    So I'm sorry
    I'm careless and I'm thoughtless.




    Submitted on 2016-05-14 12:56:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cold November rain.....

    | Posted on 2016-05-27 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel like I'm reading my own old journal entry.
    Something like November, or even before.
    | Posted on 2016-05-16 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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