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Old July


Author: Rhythmal
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7-24-15


Old July



I'm sorry, I'm careless and I'm thoughtless
But all I am is apathy and this fury is a rare thing, rising.
It's a cold fire burning and it hurts.
And every day i feel like I'm dying
But I'm sorry
I'm careless and I'm thoughtless
And my fear is no excuse
For disregarding your pain and your coming heartache
I can still feel it, the ache within me too
So I'm sorry
I'm careless and I'm thoughtless.




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  Cold November rain.....

| Posted on 2016-05-27 00:00:00 | by Chelebel | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel like I'm reading my own old journal entry.
Something like November, or even before.
| Posted on 2016-05-16 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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