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Cold August


Author: Rhythmal
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Words: 73
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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8-29-15


Cold August



Grieve
For I am dying
With every word you say
My soul bleeds
And my heart

My heart grows colder

I would remember you
If you would not forget me
But you have denied me that courtesy

If I could only deny you in kind
But I called you Brother

Anamchara

As angry as I am
I don't think that I could ever hate
Like you do




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