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    dots Submission Name: Cold Augustdots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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    dotsCold Augustdots
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    Grieve
    For I am dying
    With every word you say
    My soul bleeds
    And my heart

    My heart grows colder

    I would remember you
    If you would not forget me
    But you have denied me that courtesy

    If I could only deny you in kind
    But I called you Brother

    Anamchara

    As angry as I am
    I don't think that I could ever hate
    Like you do




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