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Author: Rhythmal
Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29 /50 /47
Words: 17
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I need a better title for this, though I don't know that it's really worth the effort.


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Every man is a castle
Every woman a chapel
And every child a promise




Submitted on 2016-05-14 13:33:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I don't know if I would say that it is - in regard to the description.
Why? I want you to elaborate on the evidence to support this generalization. I want to see the beautiful side of it, and the ugly - like pros and cons, points to end rather than ellipses to hang in suspense.
| Posted on 2016-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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