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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 816
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 160



    Description:
       I need a better title for this, though I don't know that it's really worth the effort.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

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    Every man is a castle
    Every woman a chapel
    And every child a promise




    Submitted on 2016-05-14 13:33:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I don't know if I would say that it is - in regard to the description.
    Why? I want you to elaborate on the evidence to support this generalization. I want to see the beautiful side of it, and the ugly - like pros and cons, points to end rather than ellipses to hang in suspense.
    | Posted on 2016-05-14 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]


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