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    dots Submission Name: Summerdots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 29/50/47
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This one could probably use a couple more lines to lead into it, any ideas?


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    dotsSummerdots
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    Bright Summer lads
    Dancing along these
    Bright Summer days
    Wasting their youth
    As only the young can
    In all manners appropriate




    Submitted on 2016-05-14 13:42:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I would suggest some examples of what this youth is doing during summer. Pokemon go?
    | Posted on 2016-08-25 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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