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    dots Submission Name: Be Whomdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 26
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBe Whomdots
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    Be whom
    you are
    In all of
    your glory
    and shine
    Beyond
    the Galaxy.




    Submitted on 2016-05-20 00:34:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The Never Ending Story.
    | Posted on 2016-05-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      This is simple and sweet. Nothing much to say in the way of anything specific, but it is nice.

    Erin
    | Posted on 2016-05-24 00:00:00 | by BlankSheet | [ Reply to This ]


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