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    dots Submission Name: many are cold, but few are frozendots
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    Author: PhysicsampPoetry
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    dotsmany are cold, but few are frozendots
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    Play me with your words.
    Move me with superlatives and
    Wrap me in adjectives; cup my face in rhetoric and breathe life into me with unabridged oxymora.
    Hold me in tight parataxis.
    i would choose to thaw in the warmth of your
    infinitives and gasp at the moment of our perfect conjunction.




    Submitted on 2016-05-22 14:04:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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