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    dots Submission Name: Travelingdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 570
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    Bytes: 579



    Description:
       Another piece about relationship with God, but also getting to that point.

    As an adolescent I sought art and lately I have been sort of culminating this desire for travel. Looking for his character upon the many diverse landscapes and creations of man.

    I called it traveling as it is a timeline and a lifelong search.


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    dots Travelingdots
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    Holding out my hands
    Inside the deep lines whisper many stories
    Scars singing lullabies of long forgotten glories
    Pages and pages of untold plans

    Seeking dreams revealed in all reality
    As if a girl could fly
    Reaching beyond the stars and the mysteries that they hide
    Eyes open to look upon sights that would agree

    In many faces
    And in many forms
    I do long for you to pursue me

    I could travel many places
    And open many doors
    Wondering if it is you before me




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      The last half of this post is especially nice, as if the meandering thought processes that drove it suddenly tightened into a laser beam focus on a pinpoint vision.

    are you the mirror of the earth
    or do we seek another
    futility hidden behind a mask
    has no time to seek a brother

    Just my thoughts on yours.




    | Posted on 2016-06-06 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah my friend, I will always be behind those doors, Waiting for us to unlock those mysteries existence unfolds. LOL I assume your speaking of Jesus, I just thought I'd throw you a curve. I liked this a lot, good writing!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-05-28 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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